Keep it coming as far as I'm concerned. The pacing has been pretty snappy in my estimation. Don't give me all this build up and then shoot your load in 30 seconds Ghost.
Yeah, I won't do that to you. Probably 20-30 pages left to tell in this chapter, and a whole lot of legit KIAs to even up the score with Bounty Hunter.
- Concerning the length of this chapter: Well, as long as it is still entertaining... (Which is the case!)
Also, one can always split up one overly long chapter into a two-parter (or even a multiple-parter).
Heh heh heh Sam's displeasure is one of those little things that make me smile on cue.
Yup, that's Colonel Brigham. Looks like she got promoted... good for her! Brigham's career will be something to watch over the next decade of comics since she's really smart (despite her false modesty about it), she works very, very hard, and she has a knack for being in the right place at the right time. Kids, stay in school!
Might be late to weigh in on the pacing issue, but for what it’s worth I like the current pace. I just went back and read the last dozen pages or so and when you do that it feels fine. Plus we saw a bunch of guys get blown to pieces, so it def feels like we’re getting to the top of the roller coaster!
it's monologue time"IT WAS ALL A DREAM"
Yeah, I won't do that to you. Probably 20-30 pages left to tell in this chapter, and a whole lot of legit KIAs to even up the score with Bounty Hunter.
- You know it's getting really serious when Allie actually starts to properly enunciate her "fucks"!
- A Type Four Turing Violation? Sounds like they detected run_CEL's activity?
- That Colonel looked oddly familiar, and a little archive binge proved that.
- Concerning the length of this chapter: Well, as long as it is still entertaining... (Which is the case!)
Also, one can always split up one overly long chapter into a two-parter (or even a multiple-parter).
Yup, that's Colonel Brigham. Looks like she got promoted... good for her! Brigham's career will be something to watch over the next decade of comics since she's really smart (despite her false modesty about it), she works very, very hard, and she has a knack for being in the right place at the right time. Kids, stay in school!
The DRONES need their Queen.
uh uh uh where's that youtube link for The Final Countdown?Th-thank you!